Summer nights underneath the telling stars
Watching our dreams take flight as I look into your eyes
Time stands still the world disappears there is only you and I
Lovers lips commune and passion's flame unleashed
Our racing hearts entwined a perfect melody
Fate and destiny collide our path begins toward eternity
You trace me a star in the twilight with the brush of your hand
I need no words to understand the urgency of your command
I awaken my dreams underneath the night of a thousand starry stars
Copyright © 2012 Jon Arno and Vienna Bombardieri
Date: 4/13/2012 8:04:00 AM
ReplyDeleteVery good team you make..Enjoyed reading this morn..Very romantic work..If for a contest, reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting..I enjoy writing when I can be in a peaceful state of mind..I believe that the Spirit speaks to me in those times...Sara
Date: 4/13/2012 5:57:00 AM
ReplyDeletewhat a beautiful poem you composed with Jon. You made music together!
Date: 4/13/2012 3:28:00 AM
ReplyDeletewhat a fantastic collaboration!its a magical write!
Date: 4/13/2012 1:25:00 AM
ReplyDeleteVery well written vie .i really enjoyed this.
Date: 4/13/2012 12:49:00 AM
ReplyDeleteVie... lovely.... xox...pd
Date: 4/13/2012 12:43:00 AM
ReplyDeleteThis is a very passionate piece, so lovely. Thank you for sharing Vienna...
Date: 4/12/2012 10:11:00 PM
ReplyDeleteWow, two romantic souls coming together are bound to create a passionate poetic masterpiece! Well done you two...I also LOVE the picture. Blessings, Rhonda :))
Date: 4/12/2012 9:32:00 PM
ReplyDeleteVery Nice you two! I like it! :o)
Date: 4/13/2012 9:20:00 AM
ReplyDeleteWhen you're young and in love, time DOES seem to stand still. The future is not even considered. Really like the idea of tacing a "star in the twilight with a brush of your hand." Vie and Jon, you did a superb job on this poem!! Love, Carolyn