Friday, March 9, 2012

Out Of Control


So who is this woman? I can’t look away 
She smiles when she passes I wish she would stay 
I can’t seem to focus on things I must do 
I’m looking for reasons to go speak with you 

Her eyes are amazing…there’s depth in her soul 
She speaks words of wisdom...I’m out of control 
Oh how do I focus? My mind is on you 
She knows I am looking no need for a clue 

My senses are raging …Oh what do I do? 
She’s stunning in beauty …and she’s graceful too 
I must find a way to express how I feel 
If she won’t accept me, my fate she will seal 


© Jon Arno


6 comments:

  1. A nice work Jon, but just let her go? Smile. Congratulations on your worthy first place. Agape, Moses

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  2. This is the tragedy of life, in written form. Congratulations on your placing.

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  3. Congrats of you heartfelt write Jon.

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  4. A very feeling write Jon. Love lost is never forgotten. Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest

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  5. Congratulations on your placement among the top winners. Joyce

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  6. Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jon. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol

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