I know the end is coming soon
their faces I can see
For them I stood to say goodbye
they gather now for me
For months I’ve felt a disconnect
a longing in my soul
To see the one they took from me
so very long ago
From time to time the spirit world
It opens up a door
But as I try to pass within
the opening… no more
Oh darling whisper in my ear
I know you’re here with me
Please say those words I long to hear
then set my spirit free
To feel your breath within my ear
and hold you closely too
Is all that I can think of now
please tell me...I love you
Copyright © 2012 Jon Arno
Michael Perritano
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Really enjoyed this. Thanks
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Brenda AndSterling Corry Beautiful!
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Carmen Gordian Oh my GOD Jon, awesome poem.
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Wanda Cantrell Loved this poem. It is wonderful.
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Virginia Bullis Thank you for sharing,, Great ,, :)
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Shirley Neel I love to write poetry. That is very good.
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Julie Comstock Love this Jon, It brought a tear to my eyes
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Carole Jackson Ingram Another winner!
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Maxine Fredericks Very nice
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Francine Roberts
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thats beautiful Jon
Date: 2/4/2012 4:15:00 AM
ReplyDeleteBeautiful write, Jon, very touching. Cheers, Maureen
inspired
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its a pleasure to read such work keep sharing
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Carolyn Harper this is beautiful, this wasnt a mood it is the lord guiding you to comfort some one. keep writing.
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Patty Clarke ohhhh,,,,,that describes the "ache" where someone once was,,, beautiful Jon,,,, you need to be set-up with Hallmark Cards, or something of that nature,,,,, You can always assemble your writings for abook,,,,, because,,, I want one,,,,,,,,,,Keep Wrting for all of Us,,,
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Don Conatser Nice poem!!
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Comments on your poem Whisper In My Ear
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"Beautiful write, Jon, very touching. Cheers, Maureen"
Annis Osborne Beautiful, John. Ditto what Patty Clarke said
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Lucretia Colson Love, love it, love it......perfect!!!!
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Date: 2/6/2012 1:54:00 PM
ReplyDeleteCongrats on your win with this very expressvie and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
Date: 2/6/2012 11:53:00 AM
ReplyDeleteJon congrats on your win..David
Date: 2/6/2012 10:46:00 AM
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your win Jon, love Elizabeth
Date: 2/6/2012 8:51:00 AM
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Date: 2/6/2012 7:57:00 AM
ReplyDeleteDeep emotion laid upon the page. Well written Jon. Congratulations
Date: 2/6/2012 4:50:00 AM
ReplyDeleteNothing needs to be said, you covered it, except congratulations Jon x
Date: 2/6/2012 5:53:00 PM
ReplyDeletecongrats Jon on a marvelous win for this incredible delight of a write luv..
Date: 2/6/2012 8:07:00 PM
ReplyDeleteHow did I miss this one, another beauty from your pen Jon, congrats. on your special win, love,vie
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Date: 2/6/2012 9:26:00 PM
ReplyDeleteJon, congrats... on your wonderful win.. thank you for your support ;-)' always PD
J UnitedPoets AndArtists I can relate to this poem. So touching, your writing. This is the second of yours that after I read it, I sighed. Your heart must be as large as you are. Very nice write.. Loved it.
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Margaret Gudkov so soooooo nice lovely ..spirit world .souls of loved ones they always around us
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