Today you walked back in my life
you showed up at my door
Oh Baby can I please come in
can’t take this anymore
We held each other for so long
not sure what next to say
We looked into each other's eyes
she said I want to stay
Dear Kate you can’t keep doing this
you’re tearing me apart
One day you say you love me
and then you break my heart
There are no more tomorrows
the price a heavy toll
I have to be the only one
to soothe your restless soul
Copyright © 2012 Jon Arno
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ReplyDeleteJeanne Taylor it sounds like a good one for a country song
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ReplyDeletesome people have those kind of relationships....know how to push each others butons. count to ten before....
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Carmen Gordian OMG OMG OMG, this is the best one you've written Jon, my personal opinion.
ReplyDeleteJoyce E. Wheaton You really should publish a poem book. You are a wonderful writer.
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Nita Cooley WatsonandJoe You know I am a fan of your writings.
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tone and attitude..
ReplyDeletea sweet and sour situation, love hurts..
Date: 2/10/2012 4:46:00 PM
ReplyDeletelove/hate/love...such a relationship doesn't make for tranquillity of soul, that's for sure...
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Angeles Soler beautiful Jon thanks
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Andrea Dietrich
ReplyDeleteDate: 2/10/2012 5:52:00 PM
boy, this is hard. I sure hope you both work it out!! I enjoyed reading this, Jon.
Sonya Simmons As always, touching!
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Date: 2/10/2012 6:09:00 PM
ReplyDeleteYou always write such sensitive writes, so close to reality each one of them tells a story, thank you for sharing so close to your heart, for this is where true poets are born, love and light,vie
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vienna bombardieri
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You always write such sensitive writes, so close to reality each one of them tells a story, thank you for sharing so close to your heart, for this is where true poets are born, love and light,vie
I enjoyed the way your poem flows, there is a lot of pain that comes with love, i know. Keep it up !
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the way your poem flows, there is a lot of pain that comes with love, i know. Keep it up !
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ReplyDeleteDate: 2/11/2012 4:06:00 AM
Hello Jon, I did say I'd call round; and I find you write from within and we on the outside recognize your pain. Not all can release it like this. Thank you for sharing Wordancer
Patty Clarke WOW,,,,, always good,,,,,
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Linda Kritenbrink- Estep Loved it
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Kat Solomon Jon, that is really well read. Thank you for sharing another inspirational poem....Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteFABIYAS M V
ReplyDeleteDate: 2/11/2012 10:39:00 AM
You have painted very sweet emotions,Arno.I enjoyed it
Date: 2/11/2012 11:28:00 AM
ReplyDeleteStay today,not to morrow....stay in the weekend....come and go ....that is not LOVE. -oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Robert Pettit
ReplyDeleteDate: 2/11/2012 12:12:00 PM
Nice simply worded poem with good descriptiveness and rhyming. The woman in this poem reminds me of someone I used to know.
Leslie Rule That is great, Jon!
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:03:00 PM
ReplyDeleteDifficult relashionship Jon,it can easily tear a man apart.A nice and honest write here my friend.Take Care,Arild
Date: 2/17/2012 6:42:00 PM
ReplyDeleteNO THE FEELING MATE oops been dumped 14 times in 15 years by the same lady...am i crazy?
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