these feelings held for you
I've tried to make them go away
I don’t know what to do
There is no place for our embrace
I clearly understand
But when I say I’ll go away
then no, my heart demands
I have to gather courage now
to turn and walk away
The truth is that I will not go
I’ll stay another day
Copyright © 2012 Jon Arno
Comments on your poem Another Day
ReplyDeleteCommented on 1/29/2012 8:14:00 PM by Diana-Marie Bombardieri
"Hi Jon, I enjoyed your poem this evening and can relate to it quite a bit. The heart wants what the heart wants sometimes."
Comments on your poem Another Day
ReplyDeleteCommented on 1/29/2012 8:28:00 PM by Robert Pettit
"Countless others have experienced those feelings just as you have described them so vividly. Good write Jon."
Date: 1/30/2012 2:58:00 AM
ReplyDeleteThis one hits deep, love it Jon x
Comments on your poem Another Day
ReplyDeleteCommented on 1/29/2012 8:14:00 PM by Diana-Marie Bombardieri
"Hi Jon, I enjoyed your poem this evening and can relate to it quite a bit. The heart wants what the heart wants sometimes."
Date: 1/30/2012 1:58:00 PM
ReplyDeleteWe have to fight for true love Jon.Like yours poem alot. -oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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Comments on your poem Another Day
ReplyDeleteCommented on 1/30/2012 8:57:00 PM by Andrea Dietrich
"I like this one. It clearly shows the conflict of emotions of those stuck in these kinds of situations.
Date: 2/7/2012 3:01:00 PM
ReplyDeleteNice one,Jon.Congratulations on your win....
Debbie Williams Armstrong this is a lovely piece Jon the sadness of it though
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Amanda Du Preez Maree This is a beautiful piece indeed. I have had to turn around and physically walk away from someone I loved and each step is like a decade in hell...
ReplyDeletePaul Pimentel Nice Jon...wrote something close to this today...I think we're brothers from another time
ReplyDeleteBill Shultz Your work is so smooth Jon, you have a velvet touch...and I really appreciate what you have to say.
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Phyllis Johnson-Courtney Platinum
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Anne Humphrey I like.....
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Misty Penton-Leccese I know how this feels. Beautifully done my friend!
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Carole Jackson Ingram Another winner!
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Craig Collins now thats a song brotha!
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Angeles Soler WOOOOOOOOOWWWW B E A U T I F U LLLLLLLLLLLLLL
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