Alone in the cold…from morning to night
The soldier of God …they fight the good fight
Ringing the bell…ringing the bell
They give of their time…for others who hurt
Their duty is clear….the mission overt
Ringing the bell…ringing the bell
Making no judgment…they guard the red pot
Some stop to give…and others do not
Ringing the bell…ringing the bell
Their motto the same for many a year
Doing the most good..a lone vollunteer
Ringing the bell…ringing the bell
Copyright © 2011 Jon Arno
Copyright © 2011 Jon Arno
GREAT!
ReplyDeleteI loved this....you captured the season of giving....very heartfelt, and I am
going to nominate it for the spotlight. We sometimes forget those of
simple, who help and donate their time without asking anything in return.
a fitting tribute to the volunteers for the salvation army. i found it very thoughtful and enjoyed reading it a lot nicely done
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What a lovely write!
ReplyDeleteThis struck a chord as my nan was in the salvation army and reminded me of her.
I love how you chose the repetitive ringing the bell, it worked admirably and brought the true feel and meaning of this write together
Thank you for sharing this thoughtful poem
Woo
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ReplyDeleteLike a true Christian you bring out the pain of another in this season of perpetual hope cheer for the season and the new year ahead
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
ReplyDeleteCommented on 12/27/2011 6:17:00 AM by ~Gwendolen ~
"The 3rd line of each stanza solidifies this write...a great feeling through out! They ARE soldiers of God and your poem describes them perfectly...I never seem to carry cash on hand hence, not always ready to give...You have a tender heart, Jon. Congrats on this win. Happy New Year too! Gwendolen"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
Commented on 12/26/2011 8:59:00 PM by vienna bombardieri
"They are consistent with their charity and we see them each year for their amazing selfless acts of feeding the poor. A great tribute to them. hugs,vie"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
ReplyDeleteCommented on 12/31/2011 10:33:00 PM by Robert L. Hinshaw
"John: Thank you for your kind comments re I Can Do All Things. I have read a number of your poems this evening and I was truly enthralled by your writes. I've never had the pleasure of reading your work before but I became a fan tonite! The best to you sir as you continue your poetical journey and keep wielding that very creative pen of yours for our enjoyment. Its just about 2012 here in Colorado, still plenty of time to wish you and your family a Happy New Year - Bob"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
Commented on 12/29/2011 1:17:00 PM by nikko palmario
"Happy 2012 to you Jon...wonderful tribute to those who keep on ringing those bells for the good of others...:D"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
Commented on 12/29/2011 5:00:00 AM by Anne Lise Andresen
"Enjoyed reeding it,Jon. HAPPY NEW YEAR JON ! OXOX love Anne-Lise"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
Commented on 12/27/2011 6:17:00 AM by ~Gwendolen ~
"The 3rd line of each stanza solidifies this write...a great feeling through out! They ARE soldiers of God and your poem describes them perfectly...I never seem to carry cash on hand hence, not always ready to give...You have a tender heart, Jon. Congrats on this win. Happy New Year too! Gwendolen"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
Commented on 12/26/2011 8:59:00 PM by vienna bombardieri
"They are consistent with their charity and we see them each year for their amazing selfless acts of feeding the poor. A great tribute to them. hugs,vie"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
Commented on 12/21/2011 4:48:00 PM by Annalise Brigham
"A worthy tribute to some wonderful human beings who in and out of season, give of themselves for the common good! Well done, Jon! Thanks for your kind comment. Merry Christmas and a happy New Year to you and your family. Love, Annalise"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
Commented on 12/20/2011 6:24:00 AM by harry horsman
"Love this, such an inspiring poem for the wonderful work the Salvation army do. harry"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
Commented on 12/19/2011 5:02:00 PM by Andrea Dietrich
"I love the rhythm to this one, Jon. I wrote about these guys once. I should dig up that old poem! This is just great.Luv, Andrea"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
Commented on 12/19/2011 4:27:00 PM by Sara Kendrick
"Very descriptive and expressive work..The Salvation Army does a good work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Sara"
Comments on your poem Ringing The Bell
Commented on 12/18/2011 7:46:00 PM by Kim Merryman
"A nice tribute to the Salvation Army "bell-ringers". Enjoyed reading your poem. Kim"